Life's Lesson

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    • Laurie
    • is grateful for life and words that bring abundant life...

    Life's Lesson
    Butterflies silently rising
    fluttering
    in an iridescent sunlight
    soft wings lifting in silence
    a life lesson
    a marvelous treasure
    a remembrance
    of a forgotten
    struggle
    Life begins...

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    chrysanthemum commented on Life's Lesson

    12-12-2009

    short, but when you think about it, it means a lot. beautifully written.
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    Wallysaruman commented on Life's Lesson

    07-30-2009

    Beautiful. So full of wisdom and peace in such a short poem...
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    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Thank you so much for your comment...it touch my heart!

    dahlusion commented on Life's Lesson

    02-12-2009

    The simplicity here lifts me like a butterfly
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    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    aaaah, your comment is so touching...Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words! Be blessed!

    hoovstir commented on Life's Lesson

    02-11-2009

    Simple and powerful...wow!
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    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Yes, simplitiy often creates the element of being more powerful. THANKS for noticing!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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