Lipsink Lipsunk ©Phil Golding 02/02/2008

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    Occasionally I am effected by my speech impediment. I wrote this after a gig

    Lipsink Lipsunk ©Phil Golding 02/02/2008

     

    My lips and voice-box had a fall out

    last Tuesday week

    on route to a verbal deliverance.

    Sounds plucked on vocal cords,swerved ,uncontrollably

    like lemmings on space-hoppers

    down flooded ‘Cavity Canyons’

    Some crashed into remains of ‘Road Kill’

    festering between chewing sites

    filled in by a fusion of silver and decay.

    The lemming that made it

    Cascaded a raging whirlpool

    that spilt #forced some words through

    only to be choked at birth.

    Prepubescent vocal that failed to find a way

    smacked into the back of these flaps

    landing spread eagled,

    drowned below the gum line.

    Words ‘lip-sync’ more like lip-sunk.

    So today I greet you with a phenomenally functioning

    flap formulating calculatingly clear

    vocal violin of delectable deliverance

    until Parkinson’s pop-up pirates {{{{{{{{{POUNCE}}}}}}}}}

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    Rhymer commented on Lipsink Lipsunk ©Phil Golding 02/02/2008

    09-24-2010

    Pondering the words that form on the pallet, only to be expelled in squeaky reverberations providing more laughter and a few tears. Excellent piece.
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