LOOK AT ME

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    I wrote this in the army when i was having a rough time with life and after i was done realized i have every blessing right in front of me and never knew it. GOD BLESS!!!!!!!

    LOOK AT ME

    Hey dad look at me,
    I'm pretty sure you can see,
    I've grown up and living for you,
    Things are working out I'm pulling through,
    I'm rough and strong, lean and mean,
    I'm living for you people have seen.

    Hey mom look at me,
    I'm living for you can you see,
    Working and working til the day is done,
    Can't you tell I'm your only son,
    I'm smart and wise, calm, and quick,
    I'll even throw in a kick.

    Hey sis look at me,
    Living my life can't you see,
    Rocking and rolling, laughing and crying,
    Trying to be like you always trying,
    I'm smiling and living, trying to see,
    How to live my life, like you'll always be.

    Grandparents look at me,
    I'm young and crazy like you use to be,
    But i learn from the best, learn from you,
    I know about the good ol days and what you went through,
    I'm gentle and soft, hard and loud,
    Standing tall and always proud.

    Hey aunts and uncles look at me,
    Still fighting and rolling can't you see,
    Keep rocking and rolling, thinking so hard,
    Don't fall to life, keep up the guard,
    I'm crazy and smart all together,
    I'm just like you, maybe better.

    Hey cousins look at me,
    Living my life so you can see,
    Keep living your life, proud and strong,
    Believe in your heart and you'll never be wrong,
    I'm running and flying, living for your eye,
    Living as a soldier and giving life a try.

    Hey my friend look at me,
    Living for fun or trying to be,
    So do whats right, find your love,
    Lifes not easy, its a push and a shove,
    I'm understanding and care for everyones needs,
    I'm all about help and doing good deeds.

    Hey my love look at me,
    How I'll love you always, you set me free,
    Thanks for being there and always will be,
    It's crazy to think there is someone for me,
    I'm loving and happy and there for you,
    The finally piece that will pull me through.

    So now you see why i live my life,
    For my family and friends and future wife,
    Hoping this way will lead me right,
    Giving me a future and maybe some light,
    So why do you live? Why are you alive?
    So just give up and take the dive.

    Finally there is one person i have to say,
    The most important one, that determines night and day,
    It is the lord JESUS CHRIST and all his love,
    If you trust in him, you'll be as white as a dove,
    He'll wash away your sin,
    And you will always win,
    So why do you live? Why are you alive?
    Just listen to me and take the dive.

    By: Trey Nicholson
          The Lords Soldier

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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