Look At Me

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    Look At Me

    Look at me
    What do you see?
    Do you see anything?
    Are you afraid to look beyond the surface of me?

    Look at me
    Do you see the lines etched into my face?
    Years of struggle and fear, sadness and quiet
    desperation.

    Look at me
    Can you not see I need you to be the strong one for awhile,
    That I am tired,
    That I have had to be the strong one for too long now.

    LOOK AT ME
    I'm almost gone...

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    PRIESTESSMACK commented on Look At Me

    01-26-2009

    this is a poem about how you feel about yourself. very deep. we get better as we gain experience and the lines are not a bad thing, that's character.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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