Looking at you

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  • shannon
  • Its nice today aperfect day for writting.

Looking at you

Looking at you I cant seem to find
the thoughts that run threw my mind.
everytime I look at you I smile.
A smile thats so sweet I cant seem to hide

Looking at you looking at me even god smiles and see's
that you and me have one special heart beat.
so when im feeling down and not so happy
I think about your smile that captured my
Heart beat!

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Dedicatd commented on Looking at you

03-29-2010

LOVE IS A BEAUTIFUL THNG!!! I CAN RELATE 2 HEARTS BEAT AS 1 ALWAYS!!!

shannon

01/25/2011

heyy you have to read my poem words speak.

Madelynn commented on Looking at you

12-12-2009

This is one of the most adorable love poems I have ever read!. I am sure whoever received this one, jumped at the chance to be yours. To the point, from the heart poetry with just the most sweetest taste of innocents-I will be throwin' you a 10, m'dear.

Qualin commented on Looking at you

12-02-2009

lOVE IS GREAT WONDERFUL,EVERLASTING....IN MOST CASES IT SHOULD BE SURE,SOUND,AND VERIFIED TO THE FULLEST...THAT THIN LINE THAT MAY BE CROSSED IS EVER PRESENT..GOOD WRITE SHANNON QUALIN

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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