Love at first sight

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    Love at first sight

    He was standing there
    Looking cool and bored
    With real short brown hair
    And such a strong stare

    A cigarette in one hand
    A beer in the other
    I didn't like neither
    But I could not leave either

    To turn away from this stud
    I would have been crazy
    His scent overwhelmed my brains
    Before I even knew his name

    I was not on my best days
    With my hair all over the place
    But I knew I had only one shot
    And I had to start the talk

    We chatted about everything
    And ended up sitting
    Next to a little kitten
    Petting and making it purr

    But it was just an excuse
    To be able to touch
    And caress each other
    Without any big fuss

    It's funny to look back
    At that very first time
    So much has changed
    But we are still the same

    This is the same guy
    That I love and cherish
    And I am happy to exchange
    My vows with him for life

    Life is full of surprises
    And this one of them
    I wish to all the same
    To know love at first sight
    ...

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    Artie commented on Love at first sight

    07-19-2009

    Very nice and uplifting poem. It's refreshing to see happiness written so well. 10 from me.

    ShadowRider01 commented on Love at first sight

    07-04-2009

    Well said Elizabeth. You probably dont believe but im in love with a girl name Elizabeth. Except the only diffrence here is that we can't be together, but thats another story. Anyway great job:)

    Phoenix9 commented on Love at first sight

    01-13-2009

    nice

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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