Love never fails

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    Love never fails

    Love is patient, Love is kind;
    It does not envy, Nor does it boast
    It is not proad, It is not rude,
    It is not selfseeking,or easily angered


    It keeps no record ot wrongs, Love does,
    Not delight in evil, But rejoices with the truth,
    It always protects, Always trusts,
    Always hopes, always preserures.
    "Love Never Fails"

    Gods Love is like fabric that never fades,
    Nomatter how often it is wased
    in the waters of adversity.

    When Love is tried as love anes change,
    Hold still to hope through all seems strange.
    Till ease returns, and love grows wise,
    Through listening ears, and open eyes
    "Love never Fails"

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    JAlden commented on Love never fails

    05-19-2009

    Reading from stanzas 3 and 5, I really get the emotion, and love which denotes a true poet. Don't let my previous comment discourage you, I meant it as a friendly critique, to help you become better than you currently are. Keep writing! :)

    JAlden commented on Love never fails

    05-19-2009

    "Love is patient, Love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love doesn't delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always preserves" -Corinthians 13:4-6 Seemed familiar.... haha Regardless, I think you may want to brush through it to comb out the few syntax/grammatical errors, they tend to detract from the beauty of the poe

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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