LOVE WHAT DOES IT MEAN......

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    LOVE WHAT DOES IT MEAN......

    love what does it mean to me.....
    it mean so much it can be what i want it to be
    but if you ask me love isnt a good key
    it open up all the wrong doors
    i been in and out of love it hurted me to love more and more
    love isnt a game people us that word in vain
    i dont but i stay in pain
    the pressure the pressure its killing me to even love her...
    and when i use her i use her as in me
    this love thing im going to leave it be
    when i find my one and only
    just maybe i would be able to open up and love him the way
    its suppose to be so when people ask me what does love mean to me
    i say its nothing but hell mix with misery!

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    devaamido commented on LOVE WHAT DOES IT MEAN......

    06-14-2009

    Hold that thought! There is a LOT OF WISDOM in these words. At age 18 in these perilous times, you are absolutely right & don't let any "wordsmith" twist your head around with flattery, "free offers" or "the big time". This is a really good poem but it needs a little change in spelling & grammar here & there. KEEP WRITING!! YOU'RE GOOD!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    ladyquaqua6’s Poems (3)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    HE BEYOND MY LOVE... 1
    LOVE WHAT DOES IT MEAN...... 1
    NEW BEGINNING 1