Love

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    When love is not granted, maybe waiting is better.

    Love

              My heart throps a beat,
                         only feeling heat.
                 Thoughts begin to sink, when you can only think.
               Waiting for the shadow, 
                              by the weeping willow.
    Only to hear two poundering sounds.
    Will the shadow arrives before midnights' dew?
                 

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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