loving you and for real

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    loving you and for real

     wow i love you
    can this really be real?
    how do i explain exactly how i feel?

    is this love?
    is it supposed to happen this way?
    how can it be love
    when i've only known you for a day?

    but inside i know
    that i'm really in love
    i really love you too
    i am really in love

    your hair is the color of gold
    i want to hold your hand
    it doesn't matter what youve been told
    is this love



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    janet commented on loving you and for real

    11-21-2010

    Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! But I might be a little bit biased. it is so awesome the vast array of emotions w, as humans, are privileged to experience.
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    Sx9 commented on loving you and for real

    11-20-2010

    you already did,,I love you,there is no more explanation,yes we feel your love and yes tomorrow is going to be better,but its up to you and yes its for real,,
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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