Me and the World

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Everyone struggles daily and my personal thoughts and struggles are my motivation to succeed.

Me and the World

It's so hard at times, to qualify I mean.
I cry inside daily and the color of frustration paints my face,
I try to cherish life, thoughts and memories of things I've seen.
The times of satisfaction soon ends and the glory fades without a trace.
It seems that when I work hard, sometimes it is for naught,
The only things that I feel at peace with, comes from the achievements,
with my hands I have wrought.
Time is not always for me, people are not always happy for me...
But, the day will come even if not this day.
I will stand, without the weight of the world making me want to drop to my knees.
I will be what I will be; and life will be what I want it to be. I have carved my path and on course I will stay.

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saclunch commented on Me and the World

01-28-2011

I just came across this and wanted to say.. I love your poem. It fits me today and for a photo I am doing for a project. I used your poem and put your name as credit. I hope that is okay.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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