MENTAL TRIP

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    MENTAL TRIP

    I am a queen,
    though queen I may be.
    I am my own evil.
    I've shut myself in and poetry is my only way out.
    I rake at my own thoughts,
    raping my body of beautiful blessings.
    I rake at my own memories,
    raping my thoughts of pleasantries.
    I rake at my heart,
    raping my soul of friendship.
    I am trapped in my own mental padded room,
    locked away from the world.
    I cut my body mentally just to stop the pain.
    Lonely is how I feel so please don't ever ask me again.
    I've put my hurt aside,
    and I've moved on with my life,
    But....loneliness still I feel each morning that I arise.

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    patricialouise commented on MENTAL TRIP

    06-05-2009

    I just saw your name on "peaceful poets", I do hope the "moved on" part is true. This is very moving. One I think many of us can identify with. Thanks.
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    LesHale commented on MENTAL TRIP

    06-05-2009

    Very great writting. I do the same thing when I write poetry. I write about things that have happend to me in the past. Best way to get things out. Great job keep up the great work.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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