M.E.S.S.

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    M.E.S.S.
    MESS… Misery and Evil Side by Side!
    Mess is a way of life that many try to hide.
    Mess will consume you, drag you down, and fool you;
    Yes into thinking that all is gold
    When low and behold,
    no greater lie has been told!
    Get off the stage and into the crowd,
    See what they see, are you still so proud?
    Weather it’s “Tell the truth and shame the devil”, or
    “Open your mind to higher level”, will you aspire to be better or
    Muddle through only to settle…

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    poet4dasoul commented on M.E.S.S.

    07-28-2009

    In a short piece you captured the pain of over 70% of ppl who're fixed in some lot, and having the hardest time strategically maneuvering their way out of their MESS. Thank you for the reality check I really like the play on the word mess; you seen and felt this one.
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    dancingbear commented on M.E.S.S.

    04-22-2009

    Kind of hits you upside of your head. Thanks for that.
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    FiloRozzell commented on M.E.S.S.

    04-22-2009

    It was beautiful but I'm waiting for part 2..
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    JaLaw commented on M.E.S.S.

    04-21-2009

    This poem is like a cup filled with truth, I wish the world could drink it. nice job.
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    lonewolf commented on M.E.S.S.

    04-16-2009

    i love this piece. very thought provoking. nicely done
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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