Missing Robby

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    Missing Robby
    Today my heart is heavy
    I just learn one of my kids friend just died
    I thought of him as a son
    I can't cry because I think of nim and smile
    His big smile
    His loving eyes
    His laugh that keep everyone laughing
    My kids are very sadden
    I miss him and will pray for his family
    Robby, my son, I will always love you as my son
    With GOD is where you live now
    Amen

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    Ouida commented on Missing Robby

    01-08-2009

    I can understand the pain felt when a child dies, but I think the flow of the poem could be improved upon.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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