Missing You

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  • Lost Love

    Missing You

    Oh my love
    How I miss you
    Every second, every minute
    I hope to hear from you
    I am subdue
    I want to be with you
    I know you had to go
    I just feel lonely without you
    Here in this space
    I came alive when you showed up
    I ran to you

    I thought we would never part
    Gone were my sorrows
    Gone were my pains
    I want to feel whole again
    I want to be in your arms again
    I am missing you

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    vonnie65 commented on Missing You

    09-27-2009

    Hi Featherrose, I read both of your poems and i just loved them.You are a beautiful writer of poetry.You show such deep,deep emotion which is beautiful.I also show very deep emotion when i write my poetry.Keep up the beautiful work girl. Take care, Vonnie65
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    bforibus commented on Missing You

    09-24-2009

    truly a sad story. i see where ur soul is. it can be a dark place. but hope lines that cloud. gr8 write. full of sadness
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    bluewolf commented on Missing You

    09-17-2009

    Both of your poems convey the loss of love. If I am not being to forward-have you lost someone to mirror the sadness of your poetry? Nice job.
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    Featherrose

    09/18/2009

    oh yes

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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