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    Mom

    She had me at sixteen
    And always there to lean
    I know she have always been
    Missing her teenage years

    It is sad for me to see those tears
    Falling from her weary face
    So I have asked her why
    She just looked at me and smile

    She told me she feels joy
    but doesn't seem to enjoy
    She took this confusion out my mind
    And let me know that she is fine

    In every moments that I am with her
    She keeps me safe with just a prayer
    She said those words like "I Love You"
    Words that makes me feel so true

    And then i told her she is the best
    She told me she is a mom...
    Of children filled with dreams

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    alim commented on Mom

    01-18-2010

    Natural feeling (with proper words combination) expressing true and innocent love of mother.. ..the first love of life.... it is a good attempt in that direction ..

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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