Moonlit Ride

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This was the first poem I ever remember writing. i wrote it for an english assignment when i was in 9th grade. I got a 98% on it :)

Moonlit Ride

It's a moonlit night,
The stars are bright.
He starts to drink,
He starts to fight.
The more tension grows,
The more beer flows.
I'm in the car,
He's gone too far.
Too many sips.
Too many hits.
I've had enough.
I throw a fit.
He curses and swerves,
He's got such a nerve.
He hits a tree,
We start to bleed.
I watch the blood pour from his head,
I pray to the heavens
But i know that hes dead.
I cry a stream of salty tears,
An ambulance comes
To wash away my worst fear.
That night in the car,
The beer the scars.
The scars will fade as I move on with my life.
But the memories will last...
But through out it all,
I'll never look back.

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spknwrd4u commented on Moonlit Ride

07-29-2009

Deep thoughts, but sad. Keep up the good work. You have a gift that must be shared.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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AmandaLee’s Poems (5)

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