my angel,my friend

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my angel,my friend

i have a angel,
and a good friend.
he gave me and
my sister everything,
until the very end.
but the day came,
when he had to goodbye.
that was the was the day,
our best friend our daddy.
past way and died,
we know he is gone,
but we live on.
to carry his love for ever,
in our hearts so strong.
so please dear daddy,
just let you know.
be waiting at the gates,
for us when it's our time to go.

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suzystars commented on my angel,my friend

04-20-2009

Very sentimental. You need to check you wording in the top part of the poem. (when he had to goodbye) and (past way and died) I do hear where you are coming from, my in-laws passed and I loved them more than life. Your poem got to my heart.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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