my breath

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    my breath

    When I see you I began to lose my breath
    My heartbeat begins to slow down
    My body turns cold
    I can’t feel anything
    I can’t hear a sound
    I can’t see anyone
    I can only feel you
    I can only hear your words
    I can only see you
    As you get close I’m getting nervous
    I start to worry about everything
    With you everything is different
    You’re the first thought on my mind every morning
    I wake up with a smile on my face
    For just having dreamt about you
    I worry about what to wear
    For everything I do I think about you
    If you will like what I’m wearing
    All I care about is your opinion
    No one matters but you
    I wonder if you will like how I’m looking
    All I want is to please you
    I would do anything for you
    My feelings toward you scare me
    If you ask me to do anything for you
    I would without thinking about anything
    I want to see your smile
    The smile that give me live
    You define everything sweet to me
    You show me how great live is
    As you sit next to me I feel
    Hot water is being thrown on my body
    My body turns hot
    I can’t feel my body
    As I look at you I get lost in your eyes
    I turn away quickly because
    I’m scared
    Not of you
    But of what I would do
    With you I turn crazy and I don’t know what to do or what to say
    Your breath takes me away
    Your touch gives me comfort
    When I’m in your arms I feel safe
    I have never felt save only with you
    Your strength gives me faith
    As your hands touch mine
    I can feel my blood going through my body
    I feel scared to look at you
    When I put my head on your chest I never want to leave
    I love how you make me feel
    I love your smile
    That smile is what makes me smile
    The thought of you makes me smile
    I love your eyes
    I can never look at your eyes
    I love your body
    I get lost in your arms
    When you’re near me I never want you leave
    When you hug me
    I don’t want your body to leave mine
    My body aches for you
    The day I don’t see you I don’t feel alive
    Your words is what makes my day
    Every morning you’re the first person I want to say good morning to
    I became addicted to you
    I can never get enough of you
    With you I began to have thoughts I have never had
    When you touch me I began to think of you next to me
    When I go to sleep I think about you being next to me
    Me sleeping in your arms
    I don’t know what you did to me
    But whatever it is
    I love it
    I don’t care about what others are saying about you
    Their words are just trying to keep me away from you
    But I’m attached to you and I can’t leave now
    You have only done everything great to me
    I love how your words take me away
    You always make me smile
    You are my life now and
    I love you

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    unmagopoeta commented on my breath

    08-01-2009

    excellent poem.. something that we all hold deep in our hearts a everlasting passion a feeling very hard to hide and its love... beautiful poem i love it.

    nadinhanthel

    12/28/2010

    It is very hard to express those feelings out, but it will feel even better to share those feelings with everyone who can relate and share that happiness of finding someone that will make all those dreams come true. God Bless

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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