My Empty Space

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    My Empty Space

    I try to be happy with what i got. I try to be happy but im not. I dont know where to find my place,This void i have, This empty space. My life is full of people places and things. Where's the place that happiness brings? I want to go there, I want to find mine. a piece of the pie. Loves sweet intertwine. It's not that i hate life, i'm lonely and bored. My life is full, but i feel useless,Like a shell. I'm stuck in there. Surrounded by people who love me. But they cant see,  me grive,  their not part of my empty space.                    

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    missbaby commented on My Empty Space

    11-20-2009

    Another good one , I know im part of your empty space cause I've seen you there alot , LOL , love you sis
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    katrinaLeAnn commented on My Empty Space

    11-17-2009

    read it again and i still love it..................
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    katrinaLeAnn commented on My Empty Space

    11-14-2009

    i learned from the best..this is really good i love it.. i have felt this exact way before..
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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