My Family!

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    • just like rain cleanses earth; my tears clean my soul!

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    this is a journal entry of dec.21,2009! for my family!

    My Family!

    There has never been a moment in my life, in which i've had the opportunity to say how much my family means to me. What great of an influence they have been and still are in my life. How much i care for each and everyone of them. My mom, my brothers Luis, Max, Ivan & jr. and my sister isa. along with my 2 nieces "titito's" & "nonz" and my nephew whom i have yet to meet "jo-jo" and my 2 beautiful sisNlaws "Mirna & Jessica". This year that i have spent away from you guys, has been the toughest challenge i've ever encountered. I've learned to appreciate those times i had with all of you close to me. I have learned not to fuss about stupid things. I see now that everything said was for my own good... and that over all the precious things that God created, my family, you guys, are the best! love you all!

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    redbloodink commented on My Family!

    06-17-2010

    Yes family is great....... as well as many that will touch you through your life...... Nice write keep writing I'll read em..... red

    beauty

    06/17/2010

    thanks red... i will. i'm open to suggestions too k. God bless you always!

    redbloodink

    06/17/2010

    I don't suggest...... one thing I do recamend tho... is take the time to read as many different people as you can... look at their style...... see the format and creat something new with creativity in mind....... red

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