My first Kiss

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    My first Kiss

    How do I explain my first kiss,
    It sure was something you wouldn't wanna miss.
    I was very nervous,
    Because this was going to be between us.
    I had never kissed anyone before,
    Which made my nerves that much more.
    We went to a red couch;
    That I can vouch.
     I came to her and said, "Are yo ready"
    Of course she was ready!
    I was like step One,
    Boy was this going to be fun!
    She kissed me on the cheek,
    Something I wanted to seek.
    Was this it?
    I was almost going to have a fit!
    Next was Step Two,
    I was wondering what was next too.
    She kissed me on the forehead this time
    I just thought, gee was that sublime!
    Finally, step three, was this going to be that kiss?
    Man would that make me have so much blilss.
    So, again, "Are you ready?"
    She was like, "Sure I'm ready!"
    We went in, MAN was her lips pursed perfect!
    It made me feel like my lips had a defect.
    The kiss was short, but SO GREAT!
    I felt man does she seem like fate.
    That was my first kiss.
    Hope that was something you ddn't want to miss.

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    HerAngel15 commented on My first Kiss

    11-08-2009

    I really liked your poem......You did great on it.

    ShanneN commented on My first Kiss

    11-08-2009

    awwwww, this was great. =] so cute, i enjoyed reading it. =] good job. =]

    SuperChick76 commented on My first Kiss

    11-03-2009

    A decent poem, I find some of your rhymes seems force, and last line "ddn't" just a typo, no worries. Also, be careful of rhyming the same word. But, all in all, it was a nice poem. Good job, and keep writing my friend. :)

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