MY GRATTITUDE

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MY GRATTITUDE


This poem of my gratitude is
So significant and caught in the moment
That it shows the beauty and security of are relationship
And the thoughts of are success to make this work it brings us
In are journey to love one another
Even so it is are happiness
Buried under 2000 Lbs of every kiss
Are Love is extravagant
And the connections of lust and friendship
Towards one and another
Just proves
What we will do to make this last
And hold on in are hearts.
-Tineessa-

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koolmom0 commented on MY GRATTITUDE

10-19-2009

This is lovely honey. You did a great job. Love Koolmom.

Tineessa

10/19/2009

thank you :)

nonners commented on MY GRATTITUDE

10-19-2009

very beautiful-glad to see a happy work of art well done!

Tineessa

10/19/2009

thank you very much!!!!! :)

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

Tineessa’s Poems (13)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Lust By Thy Beauty 0
Sorry 0
MY GRATTITUDE 2
Dont leave 5
LOVE 5
Friendship 1
Poetry 1
Days 1
Happiness 0
Moment 2 0
GRAVITY 0
moment 2
The moments in are lives. 0