My Love

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    My Love

    I don't say, I will die for you
    But, I will say, I will live
    To at least bring, smile to your lips

    I may sometimes, forget things
    But, everything of you, for you and
    By you, will be a thing of great concern

    I am liable to be impatient at times
    But, will always try to
    Hear you, with all the patience

    I don't say, for you, I will bring stars from the sky
    But, will try
    To brighten your life, with cheers

    I can't say, life will always bring happiness
    But, promise to be there, to dry your tears,
    Help you, hold you in arms and to share

    I may not proclaim my love, over and over again
    But my smile, concern, patience, cheers
    And sharing, will tell you subtly, that
    I always care for you.

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    devaduta commented on My Love

    08-04-2010

    It's indeed a realistic expression of true love devoid of hypocritic substance. Well done Prity

    ccslim commented on My Love

    04-13-2009

    Well said within content! The ending left me short meaning my heart needed to hear more.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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