my word to u

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to new beginnings. fresh and new

my word to u

u shall always trust in me, the way i shall always trust in u.
no ones words shall fall heavy upon our hearts, when thier  intentions are nothing but untru.

i shall do unto u as u shall do unto me,
giving eachother our mutual trust, respect,  kindness , and  loving loyalty.

i will come to u in my time of need, to reassure me my demons are gone.

and i will always stand right by ur side, to guide u when ur not  so strong.

together we unite, and our souls become one.
so nothing can come between us, or undo what we have done.  

5-12-2010
rlh

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kdarcy commented on my word to u

10-19-2010

Well done, a bit different format/font but I like it, be well k

BadBadBear commented on my word to u

07-04-2010

Nice creative energy exudes from within your great write! BBBear

cheronld commented on my word to u

05-26-2010

Such a sweet poem to the one who holds your heart...nice poem..

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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