NEEDING

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    NEEDING

    Loving you has been a blessing.
    You've changed me so much.
    To be a different kind of woman.
    A woman of God!
    A woman of worth!
    Awoman of love!
    .
    Coming into my life.
    Has given me a chance.
    To trust and love you
    And to learn to love myself.
    So contiune to be
    The man I need!
    The man I want!
    The man I desire!

    Contiune to inspire me.
    To have expectations to achieve.
    Above and beyond the sky.
    So that in needing you.
    We both can succed


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    bforibus commented on NEEDING

    12-31-2009

    essences of any good relationship is trust and the appreciation of each others traits. this poem showed one view point in the hopes or knowledge that the sentiment was returned. but the character seems so vulernable in this piece. enjoyed it ery much

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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