Night Fall

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    Night Fall

     Night Falls,
    As You And I Melt Into,
    One Anothers Arms.

    Surrounded By Nothing But,
    The Mist,
    Our Bodies Cling Together.

    In All Of The Heat And Passion,
    Of The Moment,
    Our Lips Touch So Tenderly.

    Even The Mist Fades Away,
    As You And I Make,
    Passion Love.

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    photochick commented on Night Fall

    08-20-2009

    short but full of emotion and love I enjoyed it keep up the great work one suggestion though i would change your last line to passionate love but its still great overall thanks for sharing looking forward to reading more
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    kingone43

    08/21/2009

    Thank-you For Reading My Work On Here. I'm Glad You Enjoied It. Try Some Of My Other Works On Here. You Might Enjoy Some Of Them As Well. Thank's For Reading My Poem.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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