night i almost never see you love

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    night i almost never see you love

    one day i heard that you bout die
    but i only knew i had to cry
    my love i thought i would never see you smile
    or hear your voice again
    but you prove to me that you can
    now your my faith and my honor to live
    my soul is combine with you
    our heart is as one
    but baby i need your love and your love only
    i would simply would die
    when your not around
    only the reason i breathe and
    the only reason my heart pounds everyday
    i though your death would never be alright
    but it open my eyes to see what i might have lost
    but now your okay i can stop thinkin of the pain
    but your right there and i am here
    your the only master mind i need
    i am addicted to you like a drug
    but you open your eyes when you are on your death bed
    but when i want to hold your hand when i am here
    i have my spirit fly to where ever i go
    and i was there holding your hands
    my spirits will always be with you
    and you know my love is always be there when you need it
    i would never stop thinkin bout u if your dead or not
    but i never be a crazy person in thee
    your never like the part i see
    the kind spirit in thee
    hope and faith always seem to find
    the love i see in me
    the way i let it fly
    come be with me
    now i see the loving father to be
    the babies he want with me
    a family would never be together
    unless you are with me
    family is what you want
    i would never stop you for having what you want
    but now i would cry when you are gone cause baby
    my life spirit soul and everything is to you

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    freind commented on night i almost never see you love

    05-22-2009

    very very good job well done i liked it alot.it reminds me of someone i am very close too.keep up the good work

    GingerBenjamin commented on night i almost never see you love

    04-02-2009

    very good Randa, very emotional

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on night i almost never see you love

    04-01-2009

    i like it! i wanted to give it a 9.5 but it wount let me. i am more or less a ryme scheme poet. so im not big on poems like this BUT im not going to down grade a good poem because of MY standerds im just like that. Because if i dont like somthing SOMEONE else might. But in all a good poem.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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