No Name

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  • Lost Love

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    I wrote this about a friend..we have been though a lot...

    No Name

    I remember when we first met
    you was scared to confront me
    now all I got you thinking bout
    is how much you want me

    boy things will never be the same
    from that first day we met
    cause very soon after that
    I found out your secret

    the secret which were lies
    and roumers that were spread
    I dont know why I was stupid
    and let it go to my head

    still you never gave up
    that man on a mission
    hoping I would come back
    is the only thing you were wishing

    searching for that explination
    I took the chance and listened
    soon after that I know
    I made the right decision

    I know you want more
    than the friendship that we got
    wanting love and romance
    all the things that we're not

    wanting one day
    for us to be kissing
    telling my life
    it is you I was missing

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    phatdaddee commented on No Name

    10-27-2010

    Good poem! It speaks of loss, love, triumph and honesty! I thank you for sharing!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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