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    When your stuck in a rut as deep as this
    When you see youselves so far away
    When you know that you have no one
    Everything becomes so bleak
    No one there to hold you
    No one there to care
    No one there to lift your spirits
    No one there to tell you that everything will be ok

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    richyart commented on no one

    03-29-2009

    i like your girl but i could not find very strong lines that are encapsulated with provoking thoughts.. good work

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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