Not Just A Father

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Not Just A Father

Not just a father was he

But a daddy and a friend

Even when he punished me

The purpose had an end

 

He traded away his youth

Worked hard day and night

Dedication revealing truth

To raise his children right

 

One of the last of a generation

Of fathers tough and true

Earned our respect and admiration

Like good role models do

 

His time on earth has ended

And although I'm empty and sad

Wounds are somehow mended

With loving memories of my dad

 

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bforibus commented on Not Just A Father

09-09-2009

yes. i feel this emotion. lost my grandfather but the memory of him always makes me smile and i enjoy every moment of it. excellent poem gr8 job

ravensaflight commented on Not Just A Father

08-23-2009

I really enjoyed this...especially your characterization of a good father. Those are so tough to find these days!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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