Nothing More

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  • XxLucyxX
  • Pretty little angel can we play your game? I will be gentle, I will move to your pace.

Nothing More


A hunter seen as nothing more than a vessel of meat
His power and hate shatters the ground at God's feet.
A cunning hunter all dressed in white
a hatred for humans, his poisonous lies so full of spite.
Vicious soul with a familiar face
nowhere to go no saving grace.

A devilish angel torn from God,
his father's creation questioned and flawed.
Banished to hell for reasons unknown,
His hatred growing to limits of their own.


A fear of emptiness and endless pain,
Your thoughts and nightmares driving you insane.
Keep fighting for your right to choose or it will be battle you might just loose.
A brother and Angel stand at your side. your fears of losing control slowly die.
Hope and Courage will fill your heart, A battle for life is about to start.


As you listen to his hurtful words of hate
tears can be seen run down your face.
The day you thought would never come, to give into a fate
and watch the world come undone.
There he stands so proud and dark. Fearing his plans and his devilish remark.

One final punch to the hunter's face snaps you back into place.
Your heart aching for what you've done. A puppets master has won.
A broken man lies at your feet, smeared with blood, bruised and beat.
One look of sorrow, you turn away hoping for a brighter tomorrow and a better today.

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Nothing More

01-12-2011

The metaphores are strong here, and the use of good and evil combined with winning and losing is excellent. I like how you use the devil and his anger to be compared to inner self. The final words when the character puches the hunter's face, and the heart aching for what they have done, that is powerful writing. An excellent write.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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