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  • Confusion
    • karix13
    • Oh, but you'll survive...

    Poem Commentary

    I've been so stressed lately, and this is how I feel right now. So hurt that the pain has dulled. Writing this poem helped though :)

    Numb

    You've shook me up and down
    Round and round
    Never ending
    No point
    Can't see a light
    Hurts in and out
    I can't tell if it's still going
    Oblivious
    Numb
    So many wasted tears
    I can't cry any longer
    Dry
    Unfeeling
    Trapped
    Hidden
    No one can know
    My never ending roller coaster
    Just goes up and down
    Up and down
    I wish I could tell which was which 

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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