On the Beach

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  • Love

    On the Beach

    sand warm beneath her feet

    hair falling soft upon her shoulders

    gathered skirt of linen rippling in the breeze

    for him ... she waits

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    thecross commented on On the Beach

    04-26-2010

    Great visual used in so few lines nice romantic write.
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    kacky2

    04/26/2010

    Thank you.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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