Our walk to remember

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    Our walk to remember

    as we walk down the beach
    i put my hand in yours
    for the first time in my life
    i feel so secure
    i stop our walk and pull you to my side
    i kiss your lips
    your passion you cant hide
    i whisper i love you as you look at me
    confusion sets in its plain to see
    with all your strength you try and hold back
    but your feelings of love are at your back
    you bow your head
    and then look up at me
    you whisper i love you its so plain to me

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    Shay86 commented on Our walk to remember

    03-16-2009

    greatly written

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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