PASSION

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    PASSION

    PASSION OF LOVE AND WHERE IT CAN TAKE YOU. INTO A DARK ROOM FILLED WITH THE SMELL OF CUT ROSES AND HOT SCENTED OILS THATS GLAZING IN THE AIR. THE PASSION OF LOVE, THE RACE OF ROMANCE APPEALING IT SELF TO SOMTHING VER ADENTUROUS. TWO HOT SWEATY BODY RUBBINGUP AGAISNT EACH OTHER. AS THE HEAT OF PASSION ROARS OUT THROUGTH THE ROOM. FEELING OUR HEARTS RACING AND BEATING WITH EACH OTHERS TOUCH. KISSING ON OURS NECKS SHOULDERS, RUNNING OUR FINGER TIPS DOWN EACH OTHERS BODY. USING OUR TONGE'S AND HOLDING EACH OTHER CLOSLY AND TIGHT WHILE HE GOES INTO HER FLESH. GOT BOTH OUR BLOOD RUN THROUGH OUR VINES. GRIPPING THE SHEETS AND THE BED POST. AS HE GOES DEEPER AND HARDER. THE FEELING IS SO OUTRAGEOUS THAT IT HAS YOUR EYE'S ROLLING TO THE BACK OF THE HEAD. THE SOUND OF PASSIONROARS UTTLEY FROM THE LIPS. BEGGING MORE AND MORE FOR THE PASSION TO KEEP GOING ON. CHANGING EVERY POSTION THAT MAN KIND CAN MAKE.WHILE THE ERUPTION OF PASSION OF LOVE AND WHERE IT CAN TAKE YOU.

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    melaniehorn commented on PASSION

    05-10-2009

    I have to agree with chessaol. Basic grammer does need to be addressed. When people are reading your poetry, and they encounter obvious grammer issues, it breaks up the flow.

    chessaol commented on PASSION

    02-21-2009

    Basic english needs to be addressed, the poetic license that we extend to poets doesn't include bad grammar and bad spelling. the use of new words or word combinations are permissable. use spell checker and your poems will take off, I detect talent, don't waste it through carelessness.

    cm230057 commented on PASSION

    10-28-2008

    very good i like that

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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