Placing Blame

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Placing Blame

Placing Blame

You're the ones who doubted me,

You're the ones who lied
I'm the one supposed to take this
left out from where you hide

I'm the one standing here
my friends, I have lost
One question burns the brightest
were they expectant of the cost?

Did these girls expect the worst
Losing what they stood to gain?
Did they think they'd make it better
forgetting all their pain?

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Charlie23 commented on Placing Blame

01-20-2010

I don't know what this is about, but it is very sad that it brought loss. I like your style.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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