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    I know you said you’d call
    And I know I should’ve waited
    But I’m cutting again
    And I’m kind of debating
    Whether I can handle this all
    Or if I should just give up
    Please help
    For I’m not sure I’ll make it
    I need someone to love me
    I need someone to care
    And not because they have to
    For once I’d like you there
    I’d like to fall in love
    I’ve never had that feeling
    Oh wait
    Forget I called
    I remember why I’m living

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    Writer1 commented on please

    08-22-2009

    Thoughtful and provocative. I can relate to it all. Good read!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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