Poem #3

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Poem #3

This was spring morning
The snow was melting
The river was churning
You were there staring at me

Yearning the lost love
Missing the sounds that came
Embracing my dreary grace
With your sad blue gaze
You were there staring at me

This is the part where we say goodbyes
Breaking the long web of lies
Undoing the hurt we caused each other
Clearing the souls that we kept so far
You were there staring at me

This was summer evening
The flowers were blooming
The springs were singing
You were there staring at ... nothing

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kage commented on Poem #3

01-27-2010

Like this it is a great poem, i can see the place in my mind, the words flow well and its to the point

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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