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    I went to poetry.com and much to my suprise i found myself reading as the time pass by. I read about flowers,God,and even a cloud. I read of a man in love,people who hate,and that girl who was agnery! wow ! that one was truly great!!! it was pack full of emotions like a flood gate ! I read and as i sat there i was hanging on to every word, ssshhhing, pleading childeren!! childeren!! be seen but not heard! for I have to finish this poem I'm reading its about a boy who was caught cheating!! I read ones that made me laugh, some made me cry, while others made me ask why? why? why? I read spirational,love,death,religion, and art. i read and read until I thought to myself ill write a poem and become part of poetry.com. How diffitcult could it be to write of something deep deep down inside of me!. I could not do it. it's now plain to see that you people are truly greater than me. you have talent a gift from above so never! never! stop doing what you love. As for me my mind is blank even though i told myself now think! think! think! All i could come up with was a poem about poerty.com after hours of twiddeling my thumbs. Thank you poets for you poems

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    countrypoet commented on POETRY.COM

    04-09-2009

    A cute poem.I can relate as I have gone on poertry.com am looked at other peoples poems as well.the key to writing poetry is to write about how you think and feel about different things.Keep on writing.

    diannerae commented on POETRY.COM

    02-21-2009

    Poetry.com is a vanity press and everything they do is a financial mess. I like your poem though it brings back memories. diannerae

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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