Pride Alone

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    Pride Alone

    As I look outside my window and stare off in the rain, reminising on my life and all the things I've done in vain. I look at times now and realise how much they've really changed. And the only things that are still the same are my first and last name, and everywhere I seem to go it seem like it always wants to rain....
    But yet and still, I cant complain about a thing, because the sun is somewhere shinning even when it rains. And through all the the pain that he brings, still the same I remaine...
    So here I am..... still I am!..... From a boy to a man... All alone and on my own, practically grown here I stand, with a vision so bright,.. but I'm living so trife. I may not be living to right, but my grip on life is so tight, that... I guess I'll be alright..
    Just as long as i keep living with the life I was given, I'm not really triping. Because the Lord's gift was given........
    Jesus Christ, born around Christmas... savior to us Chritians..
    And this is God's vision and decision to send us driven on a mission untill we collinde with percision in a collision with death!
    I turned to my right then looked to my left... and to my surprise, all I had left was myself......"Hm"
    so I steped back a few steps, took in a a deep breath and took it that.... in this world alone I dont need noone but my self. So still to this Day I have no regretts, epsecially when I told myself, "Anyone who wants to leave can leave"........... and they left......

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    ansari commented on Pride Alone

    05-27-2010

    it's really fun reading your poem, so light hearted but so deep. i've enjoyed it.

    JamilahAyanna commented on Pride Alone

    01-28-2010

    seems lyke things been kinda rough 4 and lyfe alwayz happens when ur plannin sumthin else but dis wuz a very powerful piece of work and dem ppl dat left u hangin.....neva wuz worth it...nyce job...

    harmonii commented on Pride Alone

    06-04-2009

    this peom really gives the reader a chance to look into you i feel like i can truly say that i know you even though i dont very nice!!!

    cliftondurant commented on Pride Alone

    04-19-2009

    great poem

    GoldnDiosa commented on Pride Alone

    04-18-2009

    i dig that too....we need to talk, brighten things u p a bit LOL nah but ur talented GOD bless

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    Life is a B**** & so is Death 14
    Pride Alone 12