*PROMISE*

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  • Hazelgurl07
  • "life is the aspect of living, while living is the prospect of life".

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JUST BECAUSE I PROMISED YOU A LIFETIME, DOESN'T MEAN A LIFETIME IS WHAT I'LL GIVE YOU.

*PROMISE*

"I PROMISE"

i promise to never cheat, i promise to never lie
i promise to stand by you in time of need.
i promise to give you my heart, i promise to never leave.


you asked me to love you, and i promised you i would
you told me to stand by you and i promised you i'll try.
you asked me to love you for eternity, and i promised you
forever.

i carried you in my arms, for a lifetime.
and i promised you i would be real.
you told me to stay, and i promised you i would'nt go away

but never one time did i say 'i'll promise to be here on our next annivesary day".

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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