Rapping for Jay

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    After a discussion one night among writer, Jay told me to try and write a rap. So I tried and this is what I wrote for Jay.

    Rapping for Jay

    Gonna try this for Jay who likes to rap
    Rapping isn't easy for a person like me
    I feel like a fish out of water, struggling to breath
    A writer with two left feet, trying not to step on another's feet
    But I don't want Jay disappointed in me
    So I'm writing these words hoping they sound like a rap
    Like I told him this isn't an easy task
    The poem doesn't create a mood, picture, or feeling
    It's just made up of words, clauses and phrases
    It's not a poem that tells a story, a legend or a tail
    It has no repeating refrain and does not rhyme
    Just hoping it resembles the rhythm of speech
    I'm not addressing a specific topic
    It's not a sad and thoughtful poem
    Nor is it short, ironic or a witty
    It's not a Haiku with lines of five or seven
    I didn't write a limerick vulgar or humorous
    It's not a poem that expresses my thoughts or feeling
    It's not a rhyming poem full of repetition
    It's not words of the same or similar sounds
    It does not consist of stanza having seven lines
    It has no shape, form or objective
    It's not a sonnet, tanka or verse poem I've written
    Just me trying to come up with a rap to write
    So Jay will no longer be disappointed in me.
     
    Georgia A. Gill-Elkins
    March 20, 2005
     
     

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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