Reflection

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    I look in the mirror seeing my reflection staring back at me I turn around to walk away My reflection is still standing there with a soulless stare

    Reflection

    I look in the mirror
    seeing my reflection staring
    back at me
    I turn around to walk away
    like I do everyday
    My reflection is still standing their
    with a lifeless stare
    I become scared and loose all state of mind
    as my reflection looks to it's side
    staring at me with soulless eyes
    Oh my goodness how can this be?
    I say out loud to myself
    I slowly back away
    then I freeze
    It pulls it's hair
    I fall to the floor
    taking it's hands squeezing it's neck
    I began to choke
    what the heck
    I began to whimper
    I get enough stregnth to scream
    while my reflection is still staring at me
    the door opens
    someone heard my scream
    I look up to the mirror
    my reflection is know longer
    staring back at me

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    MrGoth commented on Reflection

    01-20-2012

    this reminds me of a horror movie or a really bad personality clash but i like and where you went with it and made it simple and sweet
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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