Rewrite of dmc1259's poem

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    Rewrite of dmc1259's poem

    Don't worry if you can't find the right words to say

    your thought's aren't making much sense today

    yet I still choose ta' love ya' anyway

    you may find it hard to believe

    with the words I choose to say

    my love for you just grows

    and grows

    every second of

    every day

    I have no secrets

    and nothing to hide

    it is to you

    I expose

    all which lays inside

    minutes seem like eons

    and seconds like days

    when I am with you

    time seems to fade away

    I believe my love

    is out there

    I believe we'll meet

    some day

    some way

    the past?

    what past?

    I choose to forever

    live today

    one thing I know for sure

    is that

    when I find love

    I won't let it slip away

    I'll hold on tight

    each day

    and every way

    1,2, 3,4 by the plain White tees

    is what were gonna play on our wedding day

    and those three words are what I'll say

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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