Richard is married?

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Met a guy at the club last night, cute but married! I think his name must have been Richard!

Richard is married?

Oh, For goodness sakes!

Don’t you have a brother? Or some other

friend or foe you know

who can go the distance without my resistance?

Have you some clone so I won’t be alone or wait by the phone while she gets to own

your every part and break my heart? This won’t be smart! Since I know from the start

that I would rather die than ever try to cry over somebody else’s guy!

Spare me the strife, Go home to your wife and enjoy your life, Dick.

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Len commented on Richard is married?

12-21-2010

This was a very good poem, it expressed all the emotions that go into convincing yourself to make a bad decision. The fight that the mind must be subjected to when both the heart and flesh turns against it. GOOD JOB!!!!

HarverTomsson commented on Richard is married?

12-21-2010

You just gave someone a scalding scolding! And I got to watch. Harv

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