Save Me

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Save Me

Dont scream and cry
You know this aint no lie
no matter how much i try
i cant turn this to lies

I never wished to hurt you
but it's the only effect i seem to have on people
sorry bout these tears falling from my eyes
but these waterfalls never runs dry

Laughter I remember it well
but I think I forgot how
along with it my smiles and happiness

but now all i see is razor sharp teeth standing in front of me
dark black eyes starring straight back at me

and I ask myself
Why am I here?
What do they want?
How long will it be till they take me?

SOMEONE PLEASE SAVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!

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litldeer commented on Save Me

12-07-2008

I KNOW YOU FEEL LIKE YOUR IN PAIN. I SHARE YOUR PAIN TOO.THAT IS WHY WE WRITE. YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER THOUGH SO KEEP WRITING. HOPEFULLY SOMETIMES IT WILL MAKE YOU FEEL BETTER. WRITE TO ME AT LITLDEER1@NETZERO.NET AND WE'LL TALK MORE. I'D LIKE

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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