Scarlet River

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    Scarlet River

    She did nothing wrong, she was innocent as can be. She was good you see. She is walking, sprinting, running, in a deep dark ally.

    She ran into the wrong gang, a wrong turn way back. She came in at a
    bad time, and they made her world turn black. She is scared, surrounded, shot, in a deep dark ally.

    She knows she did nothing wrong, her heart has almost given up. As she slowly starts to cry, in her mind she is asking "why?" She is giving up, loosing hope, giving in, in a scarlet red river.

    She tries so hard to call for help, but her voice is lost. Though she did not do any wrong, She must pay the cost. She calls, can't, cries, in a scarlet red river.

    As she finally begins her descent, she quietly says "goodbye." and all the is on her poor mind, is one word: "die." She is dying, dies, dead, in a scarlet red river.

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    AbysmalGoddess commented on Scarlet River

    08-07-2009

    Alley is spelled wrong. Interesting story. .

    koolkid commented on Scarlet River

    07-30-2009

    I like your directtness but you pass a point wjere you tell a story but no longer paint a picyure of the events occurring ,I loved your brilliant use of die & dieing I saw in my mind eye a woman drowning in a red river. Thanks for the Poem

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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