shattered

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    My guilt and regret hangs around me like a dense fog that i cannot find my way out of without you

    shattered

    My mind is racing, please come home
    My heart is hurting, so alone
    Don't you wanna stay with me?
    Hate to be the enemy
    Come back home
    If your not the one here telling me
    Then nothing out there is ever gonna help me
    I'll never find what i'm looking for
    As I watched you leave that day
    Thought that part of you would stay
    I'm not livin right, so alone tonight
    Sittin here on my windowsill
    wishin you'd come say everythings alright
    But your sad smile, is all I see
    You haunt my thoughts, come set me free
    Feelings can't be diffused
    I've got everything to lose
    Come back home
    My mind is racing, please come home
    My heart is hurting, so alone
    Come and stay with me

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    hippiegirl commented on shattered

    03-15-2010

    good job :) ...don't regret anything, don't have guilt

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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