She Promised Me

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    She Promised Me

    A promise made; forever/ A promise broken; never/

    She had the key to my heart/ I changed the lock cause now we're apart/

    She said she would always stay in my life/ She vowed to be my first wife/

    She spoke of how she would never inflict pain/ I thought she was different but found out she was the same/

    She told me she would be here/ To wipe away every heavy tear/

    My spirit was asleep, but is now awake/ Because I've realized my mistake/

    I thought I had read between the lines/ But I didn't know that love had made me blind/

    I can't explain how i feel/ Her love was fake and mine was surreal/

    I knew the truth but believed the lies/ She was a thief in disguise/

    She stole/ my pride/ and didn't give it back/ My soul/ has died/ and my heart is in a trap/

    My soul has wept/ and my heart has bled/ Never will I forget/ The one who turned my eyes red/

    I looked to the sky and felt the thunder's pain/ The rivers of my tears equaled to the Ocean's rain/ My soul is now insane/ Because I regret the exchange/

    The exchange of dialogue; the exchange of what was real/ Or was I in a fantasy only trying to conceal/

    She said she loved me and said I was her king/ She told that forever she will wear my promise ring/

    A promise made to me/ A promise that said forever we'll be/ A promise that said her love was deep/ She said she wouldn't break a promise, that was a promise she couldn't keep///////

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    graceladymn commented on She Promised Me

    03-15-2009

    What is common to mankind, now become the uncommon, treasure no regrets, hold that love you wrote about within the divine. Become it, feel it, embrace it, release it, watch it return, whether in a new face or a familar face.

    syed commented on She Promised Me

    12-05-2008

    good flow....nice to read...

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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